Published February 20, 2002 at 4:00 a.m.
Because youre sick I want to bring you flowers,
flowers from the landscape that you love
because it is your birthday and youre sick
I want to bring outdoors inside,
the natural and wild, picked by my hand,
but nothing is blooming here but daffodils,
archipelagic in the short green
early grass, erupted
bulbs planted decades before we came,
the edge of where a garden once was kept
extended now in a string of islands I straddle
as in a fairy tale, harvesting,
not taking the single blossom from a clump
but thinning where theyre thickest, tall-stemmed
from the mother patch, dwarf to the west, most
fully opened, a loosened whorl,
one with a pale spider luffing her thread,
one with a slow beetle chewing the lip, a few
with whats almost a lions face, a lions mane,
and because there is a shadow on your lungs, your liver,
and elsewhere, hidden,
some of those with delicate green
streaks in the clowns ruff (corolla
actually made from adapted leaves), and more
right this moment starting to unfold, Ive gathered
my two fists full, I carry them like a bride,
I am bringing you the only glorious thing
in the yards and fields between my house and yours,
none of the tulips budded yet, the lilac
a sheaf of sticks, the apple trees
withheld, the birch unleaved
it could still be winter here, were it not
for green dotted with gold, but you wont wait
for dogtoothed violets, trillium under the pines,
and who could bear azaleas, dogwood, early profuse rose
of somewhere else when youre assaulted here, early May,
not any calm narcissus, orange corona
on scalloped white, not even its slender stalk
in a fountain of leaves, no stiff cornets of the honest
jonquils, gendered parts upthrust in brass and cream:
just this common flash in anyones yard,
scrambled cluster of petals
crayon-yellow, as in a childs drawing of the sun,
Im bringing you a sun, a childrens choir, host
of transient voices, first bright
splash in the gray exhausted world, a feast
of the dooryard flower we call butter-and-egg.
from Shadow of Heaven, by Ellen Bryant Voigt
The book opens with a poem called Largesse, a lovely evocation of a windy market day after a night of rain in Aix-en-Provence.
the olive trees gone silver,
inside out, and the slender cypresses,
like women in fringed shawls, hugging themselves
stall after noisy stall, melons, olives,
more fresh herbs than I could name, tomatoes
still stitched to the cut vine, the soft
transparent squid shelved on ice.
Passing under a dead goose, however, the poems narrator has a startling vision of herself, blind, high on a ledge, and carrying a baby with a spidery crack in his skull. Its a startling image, foreshadowing what I see as the principal theme of this collection human mortality in an infinitely beautiful, yet profoundly imperfect, world.
Winter Field, which is also the title of the first sequence of poems in the book, moves from a frozen field lost in snow to a harrowing near-death experience of the narrator.
We shouted, we shook you, you tell me,
but there was no sound, no face, no fear, only
oblivion why shouldnt it be so?
For those hours
I was some other thing, and my body,
which you have long loved well,
did not love you.
The Others laments two miscarried children, our lucky/or unlucky lost, of whom/we never speak. With unsparing honesty, Lesson chronicles the dying days of a controlling, repressed mother who shows her daughter her mastectomy stitches/bristling where the breast/had been. The poem concludes:
I did what I always did:
not weep she never wept
and made my face a kindly
white-washed wall, so she
could write, again, whatever
she wanted there.
In the last poem in the sequence, delightfully titled High Winds Flare Up and the Old House Shudders, death and thoughts of death are everywhere. A newly plowed field looks like a grave. A bee on the outside windowpane, working its mouth, is my lost friend, of course, who lifelong/chewed his cuticles to the quick.
And then we have a deceased friend known only as Jane, who, in an image as original as Emily Dickinsons most riveting lines,
calls from her closet of walnut and silk
for her widower to stroke her breasts, her feet,
although she has no breasts, she has no feet,
exacting pity in their big white bed.
The characters of Shadow of Heaven are surrounded by death. Yet every moment of their lives seems worth living as intensely as possible, perhaps because of their inevitable mortality. The dead themselves seem to agree, clamoring, as they do,
more, more of this earth,
more of its flesh, more death, oh yes, and a few more
thousand last vast blue cloud- blemished skies.
Ellen Bryant Voigts own image-driven poetic intensity is increasingly rare in these days of mechanical workshop poetry and fiction. Every poem in the new collection, her sixth, comes straight from the heart. Yet Voigt writes with great technical mastery, and has one of the wittiest and most distinctive voices in contemporary American poetry.
The Garden, Spring, the Hawk, a sequence in 15 parts, is structured as a letter written from Baton Rouge to the narrators sister in Virginia. Its exactly the kind of letter wed all like to receive, full of sisterly conversation and marvelous feats of language a male cardinal like a struck match, snakes asleep under a log a cluster of commas, Spanish moss that lives on air, like gray Confederate ghosts. Yet just beneath the surface lies some sad understanding between the sisters, more hinted at than spoken, of something drained off, or worn away/and not yet, in its place, a new resolve.
The third and fourth sequences, The Art of Distance and Dooryard Flower, contain the collections darkest and most powerful poems. They are loaded with memorable images and stories Voigt is a terrific storyteller such as an injured snake, shaken by a dog, its blunt head raised/like a swimmers in distress; a not quite dead turtle, being dissected for dinner by the narrators father; a dying doctor whose trained hands still automatically diagnose his own disintegration while hes tied into a chair in a nursing home; and a farm woman whose two nephews come home from war with four hands, three legs and half a brain between them.
Shadow of Heaven takes its title from a passage in John Miltons Paradise Lost, used as the books epigraph: though what if Earth/Be but the shadow of Heaven, and things therein/Each to other like, more than on Earth is thought?
Its an intriguing idea thats probably crossed nearly everyones mind at one time or another. Leave it to Milton to put it into words. And what if hes right? If he is, I for one hope that heaven too has hawks and turtles and dooryard flowers and poems like the heartrending, gorgeous lyrics in Voigts latest collection.
Howard Frank Mosher is a Vermont novelist.
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